Thursday, June 11, 2009

"Tears welled my eyes finally as the day dawned when we need to bade goodbye to each other and part our ways . Though on some day we may meet each other on the course of our journey's but this partition will be written within the precious pages of my memoirs about you , because you are more than just a friend ................."


DHANU said...

wow uday this is heart touching mannn
i loved it

uday said...

thanks a lot man ;

andamainakalalu said...

hmm the essence of the poem is good but sorry to say many mistakes grammatical,like bid goodbye not bade though some day not 'on' and seperation is better than partition .poem is good concentrate more on perfection

uday said...

thanks for trying to correct me that
was a typing mistake ; i am pleased to recieve ur advice.